Warm Up:
Prefix
- meter - measure
- micro - small
- ure - state of, act, process, rank
- ward - in the direction of
- y - inclined to, tend to
- Suffix list is officially complete!
- Check progress
- Check CAB style thesis
- Check TIED-IED style body paragraphs
- You will have today for my input
- Block Day be prepared for a peer edit
- You should have paragraphs 1-3 complete (West class must have a complete rough draft.)
- Work Cited Page
- In-Text Citation
- Citing Electronic Sources
- Roots QUIZ on Block
- Research paper due Monday, October 23
Another Writing Tool...
- Journal 12: Please record notes on the TIE Method.
- EQ: How can I incorporate quotes in a fluid way that uses the quote to build momentum rather than in a way that interrupts the text of my essay?
- TIE METHOD = Tag it, Introduce it, or Embed it.
- TAG: Tag the context to the end of the quote.
- Example: "I tell them [other revolutionaries] that I was also a terrorist yesterday, but, today, I am admired by the very people who said I was one," said Mandela in an interview on Larry King Live (King).
- Introduce: Introduce the context of the quote to lead into the text.
- Example: When Larry King interviewed Mandela about his past, Mandela explained a tough concept: "I tell them that I was also a terrorist yesterday, but, today, I am admired by the very people who said I was one" ("President Nelson Mandela One-on-One").
- Embed: Embed the quote inside of the context sentence.
- Example: Mandela explained that he tells current revolutionaries "that I was also a terrorist yesterday, but, today, I am admired by the very people who said I was one" as advice about how to fight for equal rights (Larry King Live).
- A few things to note:
- Notice in the Tag section that [the British] was added for clarity. You may add words for clarity within a quote by using the brackets too.
- Notice that the introduced quote can use a colon because the first sentence before the colon is a complete sentence and introduces the next.
- Notice that even though the quote is said by Mandela, he is not the source cited. The cited source must always correspond to an entry on the works cited page.
- Journal 12 for West - Activity...Write a quote down using one of the methods. Then pass it around...only three methods to TIE it up now!
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