- form - form, shape
- sphere - ball, sphere
- umber - shadow
Bridgette's class - Journal #12 due Friday.
EQ: How can I incorporate quotes in a fluid way that uses the quote to build momentum rather than in a way that interrupts the text of my essay?
Writing
- TIE METHOD = Tag it, Introduce it, or Embed it.
- TAG: Tag the context to the end of the quote.
- Example: "Mr. Van Zyl [the Kommandant] was trying to be a smarty pants with the people in town," mentioned Doc during the visit (226).
- Introduce: Introduce the context of the quote to lead into the text.
- Example: During Peekay's visit, Doc mentioned some insight: "Mr. Van Zyl was trying to be a smarty pants with the people in town" (226).
- Embed: Embed the quote inside of the context sentence.
- Example: Doc mentioned that the Kommandant was "trying to be a smarty pants with the people in town" to Peekay during their visit (226).
- Puctuation Notes: Notice in the Tag section that only part of the quote was used and that [the Kommandant] was added for clarity. You may add words for clarity within a quote by using the brackets too. Also, notice that the introduced quote can use a colon because the first sentence before the colon is a complete sentence.
- Activity...Write a quote down and pass it around...and TIE it up. Use all (3) methods.
- Read Chapter 13
- Journal 18
- Record at least two quotes with context using one of the TIE methods.
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