Block Day 12/12-13 ~ Final Touches

Trade & Grade Packet
  • Total score = ?/35
Review Rubric
  • Highlight your own score as the essay is right now.
Check another person's essay...
  • Does the Hook get your attention? Rate it from 1-5 (weakest to best)
  • Is the thesis in parallel structure?
  • Do the topic sentences match the topics and order of the reasons in the thesis?
  • Does each quote get properly introduced with who is speaking/what is happening?
  • Does each paragraph make sense and support the thesis?
  • Does the person prove his/her thesis by the end?
Check a second person's essay by reading it backwards. Did you see any.... 
  • Fragments or Run-on Sentences?
  • Passive Voice Sentences?
  • Past tense verbs (when speaking of events in the novel it should be present tense)?
  • Non-Parallel structured lists?
Grammar Review (on test)
  • Literary Present
  • Parallel Structure
  • Run-on Sentences
  • Active/Passive Voice
  • No Personal Pronouns
  • No Misused Words
HW: Make any corrections needed. Essays due on Monday 12/16!!!!